My manga/graphic novel

Heyyy guys im making a English non right to left manga but i need some help....

ok so far i have all the characters

Main characters

Ryuu and Yuu Yamada are weird twins cuz Ryuu is a boy and Yuu is a girl,so they always try to different from each other by being more masculine(for Ryuu) and feminine(for Yuu) and pretending they aren'y twins.So the only people who know their twins are Aku,Tsubasa,Mai,Mei,Mao, Karina and Lee but most people can tell there

Akumuri Hayashi is not interested in any of the boys in her school,she's only interested in CHALLENGES and cant refuse a good challenge.

Tsubasa Yoshida is in love with Mao but he has no idea how to tell her.

Mai,Mei and Mao Suzuki are triplets all girls but Mao has a devastating secret..dun...dun...dun...dun...anyway,Mai loves drawing,Mei loves cooking and Mao loves writing(only poems)

Karina Nakamura is a pretty girl...just kidding Karina is actually a guy with a girly name who is ever so perverted.

Lee Itō is a very different person,he is smart,active and confident but for some reason none of the girls like him...maybe cuz hes ugly

Title:"Kanzen ai Debut" or "Perfect love debut"
Plot:they all try to find love by the end of their high school graduation

is it good??

All i need is some good ideas,some secondary characters and ideas on how the charries should look.

Also i need one person to write it cuz my writing is messy...thats why im doing it at school....and if you want to help me draw it you canmake me a nice title page...

Like it??Jess can you make me a good title page on shi painter size is about W=508 H=982 in pixels..i hope its not too much for you too make but can you??You can design it however you want....

Oh...manga...:3

Unfortunately, I cannot draw manga so...A STORY WOULD BE BETTER!

LOL really?? i can draw manga pretty well all i really need you to do is write the stuff they say cuz my writings messy....

:3 Yay for writing!

yay for drawing!ok so far i drew only the faces of Tsubasa and Aku

Oh...cewlez :3

I fail at their hair so...ya...But I guess I could draw some decent manga as well. *Goes off to doodle*

r they good enough?I draw them better when there bigger....can i see some of your manga pics?

But of course *Glares* You may see my masterpiece (not) when it be finished...

Grrr....fine r u done?

pathetic anime drawing....Ryuu--->

Maybe..NO! I didn't even start yet! Be patient!

Edit: Ok I finished..it was actually quicker than I had expected (about 8 minutes) The only problem now is...HTF do I get it on the comp?! I can't use a camera (Can't find it), the scanner is broken and web cam makes it too blurry...Gah...

Oh and I know this story/manga/whatever is all 'LOVEY DOVEY', but don't you think it would be AWESOME if there was some action...Cuz, overall actiony manga are more popular.

Like in vampire knight, it is very 'lovey dovey' but it has killing :3 And it's popular...lol...


AND CAN AZURE BE A CHARRIE IN UR STORY? I DREW HIM IN HUMAN-FORM! :3

SURE AZURE CAN BE IN IT!!!!!
ya i no...its not so lovey dovey im mean it is but not so much...its more of an romantic comedy with some action without it it would be plain boring....so r you going to help me make it?Also do you think my drawings are bad,ok or good(pick one)

ok so you can add one more charrie...cuz im getting rid of lee cuz i dont have any idea of how to make him....
and i wuz thinking if i got this anime maker we could make it a anime series!cool right i just have to wait until Christmas.....

lets give ourr charries some descrips...k?want me to tell you Mao's secret???

Yay for Azzie :3

Yes...Lets make them kill each other, ok, maybe not...

Ok I luv the pic of Aku, but the other charries may need some work...ANYWAYS I can wait til Christmas, but we should just kinda draw out everyone first.

OooOOoo....I liek secrets! Tell meh Mao's secret :3

Ok mao's secret is...she's actually a guy...yay!

Anywway find a last name for azure and help me with some secondary charries...

Secondary charries

Keita,the school council president.

Daisuke and Remou, keita's followers

Lol, wat? rly...

Azzie dun need a last name...He shall be called Azure-sama by anyone who wants to please him, Azzie-kun or Azure-chan,by his friends, And perhaps 'Teme' by those who hate him too much...Oh and for the people who don't really hate him or like him, they'll simply call him Azure.

no its just fun to make last names....so ya.....i drew Yuu,Ryuu,Mao,Mei and Mai i just need Karina,Tsubasa and Azure.So do you want to draw Azure or do you want me to draw him?If you want me too give a descrip. of him..k?

k so did ya think of any secondary charries?

actually could get it on eid(random holiday for meee)this program makes our manga story into a show that we could put on youtube....well we have to draw it but i guess it would be easy....

I can draw Azure..well...I already did...but if you'd like to draw him too...THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!

~Description~
His hair is roughly shoulder-length (A bit shorter) He has a dark blue headband, like Aku. If ur not drawing his clothes...I guess thats it...

And for secondary charries...Uh...Meiun? Her name means 'fate' you can make a description for her.

hey for drawing azure can I see the one you drew? Ok so meiun is a girl...with long straight hair and has two mini pony tails ok so I found a book to dew the manga in..it's a sketch book but oI well..

No actually she's a kid with long brown hair. Her eyes are reddish in colour for she has no soul...SERIOUSLY!

And yeah lets draw the manga in a sketch book :3 Oh and who else is drawing/writing? Cuz I don't think it would be a good idea to have too many people helping us...

BTW, Aku= Evil, wickedness

oh....i already drew her .....oh and BTW there all freshman in high school...so she cant be a kid unless she's azure's sis or somebody elses....also she cant be a main character cause she doesn't go to the same school,so she's a secondary ok?
ok so...

Drawing
Main:Sarah
maybe homa...




Writing
Main:Jessica
Sereen

and Aku is somewhat evil but most of the time nice,kind and annoying.......i think meiun would do good as aku's or azzie's sis.. oh and Aku the main main charrie k?

I can draw as well.

And actually Meiun is Azure's sis, and she isn't exactly a little kid (is 13y)

And how bout Raiu, he's could he be a main charie? I'm guessing that he's about 16...dunno...

But my CF (Crossfire) charrie's name is Aku...D:

My charries nick name Aku her real name is Akumuri so her friends call her aku or people who like her alot(more than friends)call her Amu-chan(her mom calls her that) k?

ok so we have

Main charries:
Akumuri or Aku or AMU-CHAN,16y
Tsubasa,16y
Yuu,16y
Ryuu,16y
Mai,16y
Azure or Azzie,16y
Mei,16y
Mao,16y
Raiu,16y
Secondary charries:
Haruka but his friends call him Haru....he's Aku's younger brother,15y
Keita,16y
Daisuke and Remou,16y
meiun,13y
Hisoka or sensei he's a first year homeroom teacher,25y
Etsu is Aku's mom,??y


ok all the mains are 16...and they were uniforms,how bout we practice drawing our charries first the we start the manga k?

B-But Aku is Akumu's nickname D:

And her mom shouldn't call her Amu-chan...

Chan=What you would add to the end of a friends' name. Usually used by young children and teens.

Oh and...Mei means 'beauty' Mao means 'hair'...lol...And MeiMao means 'eye brow'...

Owell....ok so tommorow's school ...

Have any other secondary charries?

Yay..school *dies* So...when do we start with da manga?

im not sure we arent in the same class so...how bout on a saturday or sunday you come over to me house or something like that....